“Write a short story/flash fiction story in 200 words or less, excluding the title. It can be in any format, including a poem.
Begin the story with the words, “Shadows crept across the wall”. These five words will be included in the word count. If you want to give yourself an added challenge (optional), do one or more of these:
- end the story with the words: “everything faded.” (also included in the word count)
- include the word “orange” in the story
- write in the same genre you normally write
- make your story 200 words exactly!”
Shadows crept across the wall. The orange sun set. She was nervous. Her fiancé was coming home. They hadn’t seen each other since entering the Army. The last time, eighteen months ago, was in Fiji, spent mostly in swimsuits. She was proud of her looks, which made heads turn.
She drove Army trucks until the IED. Badly burned, it was a miracle she survived. Her soft skin was replaced with scar tissue. What would he think? She desperately wanted to be held by him. Would he want to spend their lives together now? She had written him about her disfiguration, suggesting he reconsider their relationship.
He replied that they would talk when he got home.
His car pulled up. Looking sad, he walked to the door with a pronounced limp. She opened it. He immediately threw his arms around her, kissing her.
“I have something to show you,” he said, revealing titanium leg braces. “I lost my legs below the knee. If you want to breakup, I’ll understand.”
“Look at me. What do you see?”
“I see the woman I want to marry. And you?”
Crying, she replied, “I see my strong legged fiancé.”
Except for their love, everything faded.
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This was a very interesting assignment. My first draft was 483 words. I didn’t think there was any way this story could be edited down to 200 words without loosing its essence. It took me a while, but I did it. A lot of words can be superfluousness. Live and learn.
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